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Substance Abuse

Take me back to the days where we would play
those nights were more addictive than cocaine
and I could make her smile,and I go up up up but just for a little while
and take me back to the shift, so I can take another pill and try to ignore this shit
Because all you want to do is blow my brains away
and all I want to do is drink my pain away
but all I'm gonna do is piss my days away
and I can still hear you say

Hey babe,you shot me in the heart so i take a couple pills cause I wanna forget you
Hey babe,you knew it from the start, so take that gun apart cause I don't wanna hurt you

And I would trade every chill,
Every pill,all the weed, all the green,every seed
all the booze just for you
but, I've Climbed so high, higher than the sky
I wanna come down but im too high
and Im too stoned I got a shotgun wedding to this cocaine nose
I'm tripping on my chlothes , I'm stumblin' and Mumblin' and steppin' on my toes
So I take another sniff and I let go

cause I don't know what you seen,
all I know is it's far greater than what I could be
and I don't wanna get up and I don't wanna come down
Don't give me that shit, I swear I'll never come down and I'll never calm down


Hey babe,you shot me in the heart so i take a couple pills cause I wanna forget you
Hey babe,you knew it from the start, so take that gun apart cause I don't wanna hurt you


Okay so here it goes, I'll hide the bud in my lungs, hide the blow in my nose
and I'm searching for the trance, searching for the party,
Lurking on the dance and slurping on Bacardi
now were pushing and were shoving and were going undercover
and her dads an undercover so I fuck her with no rubber again

I got Maryjane in the pocket of my pants,
I got a couple blue pills in the palm of my hand
I'm gonna throw it down my throat with a little bit of water
or maybe some Bacardi or maybe some vodka

Your just a girl worried about her boy in this fucked up world,
we're all just fuckin toys but you cant stop,you cant stop the ringing
these walls must be talking,
No,there really fuckin' screaming Hey Babe...

Author notes

This is one of my songs lyrics turned into a poem.
It's about someone that is depressed and  hooked on drugs ranging from weed,to xanax,to coke.

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Comments

  • I'd have loved to have heard it as a song - bet it rocked!

    I thought this was excellent. i hope you won't mind if I add you to favourites. Keep writing as you have a real talent for it. I loved the flow and expression in this, again though - would have loved to have heard it as a song.


  • tinaxoxo49
    October 21

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    I don't get how you can forget someone when your fucked up.. Because everytime i've been fucked up it just makes me think about the people more how terrible my lifes been and everything