This paper in front of me
lies blank
my mind is not
it has a story
about many
men
women
emotions
actions
reactions
emotions
senses
gratifications
frustrations
jubilations
celeberations
depression
hate
weight
late
deception
two timing
three timings
and daily timing
multiple ids
confused as MPD
emotions
falsity
ramifications
ephemeral damnation
religious hypocrisy
and indoctrination
emotions
accusations
avoidance
ignoring
poems
and poems
short long
complaining
and lauding
sinking
linking
croaking
growling
strolling
running
emotions
busy
work load
and love
and amour
and rejections
and..
and...
and...
many,many,many more
jigsaw puzzle
a dense and evolved one
that has piled over time
and I cannot get them to rhyme
most of that flashes in
is hard to put together
as brain whirrs and stirs
aches
pains
aches pains
and more
making cracking
emotions
sounds
at temples
starting from jaw
I am tight
in this intellectual fight
words come and go
most slip by
and mesh together
I hold on to ten
other ten runs haywire
I need a collaborator
one or more
that would help me
make this blank paper
into a well knit
readable caper.
Author notes
into a well knit
readable caper.
Applications are cordially invited for collabs......I wanna cover all of the above and more in about a 50 pages caper....over a period of time.please do not be effusive enough to point out to me that some words like'emotion' etc are repeated and they are ,in technical lingo 'fillers';their use was well thought out and intended.
Project Director: Poet sgking123
Co-Project Directress: Poetess Firequeen
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 1: Sinfull
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 2: blueyez
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 3: Kathraina
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 4: MissingBatteries...also helps in project coordination
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 5: WindUpEnigma
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 6: Cherrylv
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 7: Melee Vau
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 8: fiona8
Veteran Author Poetess(VAP) no 9: storiesuntold
Please tell me what you think
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storiesuntold
the poems below you have my permission to use in your caper
as long as I am shown as the author of the writes .
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5916307
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5904597
http://allpoetry.com/poem/589
9373
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5902463
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5871215
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5839459
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5818668
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5772515
name Patty DeGroff
Uvalde Texas
email
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I love it
Count me in OK
permission to use my poem
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4847405
my username is storiesuntold
my name is Patty DeGroff
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I, Pen name sinfull, real name T.Turrell
Give you permission to use my poem Capersin For the Capers project
You have the email if you need additional info. -
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5873457
I, Beth Williams, hereby grant permission for these poems to be in your collection.
NC
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No email at the moment, so please message me here: http://allpoetry.com/Kathraina
Real/Pen Name: Katherine L. Stachurski
Location: California, USA
I, Katherine L. Stachurski, authorize the use of my prose piece "Caperkat" in the poetry collection "Readable Caper". -
email: bluemoonroze@gmail.com
pen name: Rose/ Julia Rose/Julia Rose Goldhirsh
location: Florida
I SeraRoz authorise the use of my poem Caperser in the poetry collection Readable Caper
Prompts: 6.senses 21.falsity 41.love
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5860597 -
yr email -- dallenhemingway@yahoo.com
pen name/real name-- Caperfio/Fiona/Diane Allen Hemingway
location-- Michigan
permission to use caperfio in Redable Caper -- You may use my Caperflo poems
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I......blueyez permit my poem Caperblu to be used in the collection Readable Caper for printing electronic or otherwise.
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IF able, and given a til the morrow to complete, I'd like to be given 3 prompts.
thanks for considering me. I hope I'm doing this right..... -
caperfio
- And When I Cant Ge it to Rhyme
- Making Cracking
- And Mesh Together
-Senses
- Emotions
- This Paper in Front of Me
- Many, Many, Many More
- Starting from the Jaw
- Falsity
- Most of the Flashed in
*not good at graphics either
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very intresting and creative...It morps onto many paths taking one on a journey within a mulitude of thoughts.....I like this very much...novy
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I, Kendal Baldwin, have no objection to you using the poems contributed by me for further publishing, and I authorize you to deal with the puplisher(s)/printer(s).
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Ok I'm posting mine now
I hope they are ok and if they are not hard luck 
Cherry xxx
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So...we can pick more than our allocated 3? And why the repeat of my prompts? Seems a little redundant.
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hello there
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great usage of words you penned them into some thing brilliant I love the message and the brilliance in this piece .. thank you for sharing your pen Hugs always Angel♥
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Lol my goodness where do you start indeed there is every emotion and every circumstance listed here I would love to join in and add what I can for you Cherry xxx
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Sinfull sent me to you. My blank page is looking for all of the above.
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Such a great stream of consciousness! I wish this happened whenever I looked at a blank piece of paper!
Nice one!
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~Brilliant!
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Wow
You have given something to eyery writer whatever kind she or he is
to think about what an excellent writer something in all your words we can certainly identfy with.This is truly one great awesome write you said it all who ever comes across this right will understand the meaning of who a writer is. I saw myself in every word and sence of your write . Loved it very well penned with such true meaning thats wonderful.Keep on penning This say's it all like i said for every sinle writer. Well well done!And another thing i like to add theres a very sensative side to the poem in which I was moved personally.
God Bless!
Sharon
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wonderful usage of simple words loaded wih meaningful depth and intensity and energy of a spinning wheel from fairs of chilhood.the poem is very sweet and intense also the message is vibrant and beautiful.very captivating and wonderful, thanks for sharing and take care...
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amazing
amazing. what a roller coaster ride of emotion. you capture the readers and never let them go.
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allocated prompts
sgking123: multiple ids ,daily timing,deception,revenge,ephemeral damnation,religios hypocrisy.three timing.ramifications(8)
GuiltedShadow: emotions, senses,actions, reactions,late ,poems, ignorance and passion(8)
sinfill:anger, two-timing, happy, sex, sensual, work-load, msp (7)
blueyez:avoidance,complaining,linking,growling,strolling,armour,rejection,
depression(8)
kathraina: frustrations,gratifications,celebrations,depression,hate(5)
MissingBatteries:jubilations,ramifications,men,indoctrination(4)
WindUpEnigma: deception,women,falsity(3)
Melee Vau-deception,women,falsity(3)(we need second review)
Cherrylv:accusations,short, long,lauding,sinking,croaking (6)
fiona8:RHYME,CRACKING,MESH TOGETHER,SENSES,EMOTIONS,THIS PAPER IN FRONT OF ME,MANY MANY MANY MORE,STARTING FROM THE JAW,FALSITY,MOST OF THAT FLASHED IN(10)
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ok I got my allocated prompts . hey but wait. can I pick some others too? I'll do the ones you gave but i see a few others I could get in to
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all done will do as requested as one poem
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to be allocated to incoming project directress
These keywords are allocated to captioned poetess:
emotions, senses,actions, reactions,late ,poems
others may choose 6 from remaining.....craft 6 poems and put them on one page and upload them as one poem -
to all VAPs & FAPs
1.men
2.women
3.emotions
4.actions
5.reactions
6.senses
7.gratifications
8.frustrations
9.jubilations
10.celeberations
11.depression
12.hate
13.weight
14.late
15.deception
16.two timing
17.three timings
18.daily timing
19.multiple ids
20.MPD
21.falsity
22.ramifications
23.ephemeral damnation
24.religious hypocrisy
25.indoctrination
26.accusations
27.avoidance
28.ignoring
29.poems
30.short long
31.complaining
32.lauding
33.sinking
34.linking
35.croaking
36.growling
37.strolling
38.running
39.busy
40.work load
41.love
42.amour
43.rejections
44.depression
45.recovery
46.bitching
47.instigation
48.anger
49.revenge
50.happy
51.sex
52.erotic
53.sensual
54.passion
55.
This is the list of 55 keywords..you can suggest additions deletions so as to make them come to fifty.after this we commence allocations -
You're right... VERY different, but intriguing. Leaves one to dream up various possibilities of not only where this began, but where it will lead.
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very interesting and different, as you said :] nice write !
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Well You have covered a lot in this poem and it is a little much but I think you are able to handle what ever comes your way. Good write
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Paper Caper Vapor....the story of our lives! You have an captivating project in tow with that fertile mind of yours. Inky, for sure and ya gotta beware of feathers. They are like getting caught in a blizzard sometimes. Those emotions become mile posts.
Karen
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very interesting. fun read!
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very different.
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there's some beat in the words. beautifully written
and i also liked the repetition of the word 'emotions' simply because what links all of that with your ink and paper is a bunch of emotions... well done
sincerely...
-sherry
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intresting
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This is certainly one that moves on! I wanted to read it so fast I could barely take in all the words, and I like that you've added pace to what is already a multi-dimensional peice. There are some really nice ideas in here, and I like how it almost calms down to become the well-knit caper you so desire. Another excellent write.
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Very Interesting
I was thinking as I read this it should be made into a contest with blocks of words
I like making stories and poems from word blocks. You have listed some very useful words in this well crafted piece.
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I enjoyed the tempo of this, it added intensity and set each emotion apart, yet, part of a whole. I liked emotion being repeated, it felt like being lost in a whirl wind, like being in the eye of the storm.
blessings,
Michelle
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And i suppose you might fit into all of that some where too? How are you? I hope fine.
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thanks for the comment
lol..in a major manner........grinning........hell you are so perceptive..........
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!!! Amazing. I'm almost speechless. Every word was so deliberate and beautiful. I heart wordy poems. This is amazing.
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wow. when I got your message, I was skeptical!! but this was a wonderful read. thank you. it was such a readable caper. and i loved the repeating emotion.
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I love the rhythm and vitality in this piece. It's exciting and inspiring. Good writing!
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Interesting and cool idea
I think you have a wonderful project idea going on
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I'm not sure what a "caper" is, but i really like this so far! you cover a lot emotions and imagery here! very intriguing
bravo and thank you for sharing
♥ kate
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Brava!! Once again u managed 2 outdo your self. It was definitely a change of style but I loved it nonetheless
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It's an intriguing project.
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Wow this is kinda long for what I usually read but it kept my interest up... and I did read the whole thing... and thought it written very well. I like the theme of writing something on a blank piece of paper. Good creative write you have going on here. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Wow, my mind was blown away reading this...fantastic read!!
Great idea...you've given me something to think about
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Lovely
I had to brush up on my knowledge of the word caper, but that aside it is a wonderful poem.
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excellent
Had to get my dictionary out, but a compelling little number, lol and ifelt I knew just what you meant brilllll!!!!
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Hey you could use these as prompts as well as a poem maybe you could find your collab partner that way i like the repeating bits personally its like your thinking what to put next which many of us do when we get a huge block we cant get around i like it really made me think what you were going to put next made it more interesting
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A very cool idea here. What you need is a method of approach. a way of presenting that allows alla that and then some plus doesn't bore the reader as reading ...yada yada...this could be a challenge. Ideas....will shoot one past you after I invent one to shoot, =)
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What I like most is that the only-ish line with end line rhyme (other than one word lines) is the line that tells me that you can't get it to rhyme.
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Now that would be some caper wouldn't it 50 pages! - I think our writing styles are too different but I look forward to reading it !
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cool > i agree with MsPain
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Really like it. lots of feeling
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So many emotions bombarding one at once can sometimes be diffcult to pen. I like the idea of a collaboration. I will keep an eye on this one.
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nice! I shall get out my knitting needle
If you need help holla
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sure case
keep it honed and inked sharp.....I may be calling on ya sooner than you think...thanks for the laud
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