Brimming eyes of stone,
Overflowing with great joy:
Tears of forgiveness.
Author notes
Traditional Senryu 5/7/5
A contest entry
- prewrite contest 1st come 1st serve by serenity silvermoon.
821 points, ended October 22, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You're a Master!
WoW!!!!!! I'm quite impressed with your short poems, Raul! This haiku is superb! Its third line is so powerful, my friend. Excellent write. Are you listening to that sound?...I'm applauding... : ) Ruben.
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lovely senyru
thak you so much anoter stellar write
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