You thought you had me?
You pathetic weak minded individual. You thought you would snap your fingers and I would jump to obey your every command?
I was burned once for doing that very thing. I don't need a second lesson in that department thank you very much.
I've been bested by someone much smarter and stronger willed than you will ever be. She took my heart, tore it out, and smashed it upon the cobblestones of life.
You thought you had me?
You thought you would get your heart’s desire lurking within this soulless corpse I call a body? That I would answer your whims and become exactly what you wished me to be?
She taught me to stand up for myself, then threw that lesson in the dirt when i dared to do so to her.
You thought you had me?
That I would simply give up my life for you? You! You are not the only one who dared to dream that I would be yours forevermore. You who is a lustful creature full of lies and intrigue, and you, you silly little girl,
you thought you had me?
I would laugh for the mockery you have made of a friendship. The hurt and despair that I feel however ground me to the very depths of emotion.
How can you think you had me?
I don't even have myself.
Have you ever stared long enough at yourself that you can imagine....
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This is exactly how i felt yesterday...and I'm back where i started from. beautiful write
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Quite brilliant, drama throughout the page, you've dug deep and come up with a super creation.
Regards.
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Awesome
Sounds like you fell victem to a heart break. I had one myself. And the question I kept asking myself was why. Great write, it was very well written and coordinated. Thanks
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To look at oneself, hard. This, as always, is well written and I understand it all to well. You know where I am if you want to yak.Hugs you my friend.
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Very well written! I know this situation all too well!
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Applause.
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The repition is very strong-willed. I sense a little anger but mostly resentment, perhaps a sprinkle of hate. I offer this. Your ending thought is so unsure of yourself. Why? Perhaps she thinks she has you because she knows you don't have yourself. ?. Be sure in yourself. I know you can do it. The rest of your thoughts are very strong to you. Come from that, find a resolution, and you may find your self actualization. Change isn't easy but definitly alive and well within you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. They have made me think in relation to a situation I am in, I will take your words and learn from them. Than
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