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Ghandilions

Deeply rooted, I cannot be destroyed.
Kill my body, and my kindred remain.
You can never remove us all,
though you only see an obstacle
to be overcome.

I come to heal the rifts you’ve made,
the scars [d]ragged across human hearts:
ruptures transformed into nourishment.

I am the golden-headed wine
that warms in winter’s dark;
the bold, bright color
of summer’s tinkling laughter;
the draught of rejuvenation
that purges long-held toxins.

Why do some, then, see me only
as a weed?

I hold the space where
human hearts wish to dwell,
the green-deep nourishment
that penetrates your cells.
You cannot do it alone.
Did you forget?

You need the memory of me,
you need my persistence—
the bright reflection of my face
lighting up your eyes.
You cannot do it alone.
But then, neither can I.

Your sweet song breath
upon my soft cloud head
wishes my children onward.

You must take me in
for me to fulfill my function.
I am not complete until
we two become as one.

After all, my roar is a quiet one
heard only by ears who

S T O P.

long enough to listen.

Author notes

Prompt: Dandelions http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=krNsXZ-aDwE

2009 October 12

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  • longte
    November 16
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    Ten years after my father died I found some dandelion wine he had made a long time ago. It was truly a foul brew when bottled but all those years later it slipped down very easily indeed.
    Memories of fields and clouds of seeds that are now housing divisions, where they try desperately to remove the irremovable [If you ever have a sick lizard let it feed on dandelions and it will recover very quickly]


    • BearWoman gold member
      1 day ago
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      Thank you for sharing part of your story. I think you are the first person I know who's actually drunk dandelion wine! Yes, how the fields have been stripped. I remember reading some of Ray Bradbury's works and reflecting on how things changed during his lifetime. In ours, "progress" has only continued. Can we stop it? Or is it inevitable with the continually increasing global population?

      Thanks for the new use I never before knew of for dandelions. Truly an amazing plant! In many parts of the States, dandelions are one of the first plants to grow in disturbed ground. Great for stabilizing soil and reducing erosion, though the bane of monocultured lawns. (isn't that a swear word yet? It's four letters! )

      Thanks for stopping by, reptile lover.


  • Nickelspring gold member
    October 24

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    This is simply fabulous! I would point out some favorite parts, but there would be too many, but I do love that 3rd stanza. I really think this is a wonderful piece on the heels of "Dandelions" linked in your AN (which simply made me cry!)
    Im glad to have experienced this this morning
    Excellent!

    Kris


    • BearWoman gold member
      October 24
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      Thank you very kindly. What wonderful praise you share. I am very pleased with this piece.

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    October 20

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    Love the title, your words are indeed full of wisdom, you join yout subjects with warmth comfort and talent, thank you for this inspiring poem.

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