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You Were Mine

Many nights
I laid in your arms.
Many mornings
I kissed your lips.
Those days
have ended.
We were happy
in love and joyous.
Now the days stay grey
and the nights are lonely.
I remember when
you were mine
and when we loved.
I see you now
with another lover
and I run and hide.
You don't see
how bad you hurt me.
You gave up love
I gave up my heart.
I've cried for days
and hidden from friends.
All the world looks away
as I hide in shame.
I can't smile or laugh
I just lost my soul.

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 7

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    very sad. I hope that you are able to find the closure you will need in order to move away from these hurt feelings. You are very talented in your writing. thanks for sharing.
    peace and light,
    Kendal


  • xxdarkvalentixx
    October 25
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    I hope your heart will heal...your poem was beautiful but it almost made me cry.


    • ArmyBrat17
      October 25
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      thanks it's a kinda hard time for me right now so I wrote the poem to express my feelings

  • this is very sad but i see one spelling mistake
    Nw the days stay grey
    and the nights are lonely.

    did u mean now?


    • ArmyBrat17
      October 20
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      yes it was supposed to say now. Thanks for pointing that out to me

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