Never before had I seen
so many people singing.
The tears pour out
as lovers rejoice
and marriages are over.
Wedding day pictures
taken out of books.
Thrown across the floor
and left to fade.
Beer and wine are now your friend
lives are lost and tears are shed.
The love is over
and the pain is worse.
Waking up in tears
and no one knows why
but I hide my fears.
Kissing your lips
and savoring the love.
This can't be the end
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I absolutely love love love the way this was worded all the way to the end. One exception: "noone" should have been separated as "no one". Otherwise, the penmanship was excellent, the point driven home, the punctuation a plus. Great job.
Keep it up.
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Great work!
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wow i love this keep it u[p
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This was a very moving piece. Sad. I am sure that there are people out there that can realte too this in some way. This was good. Keep up the good work.
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this is so sad little sis
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