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Your sparkling eyes from across the table
    The smok and wine fills air
        The feel on your hands in mine
    Your fingers soft and strong
Your lips perfect and pink

      The music wafting over
      Rocking my heart like
    A bout on an ocean
      You know what I love.

The clinking glasses are hushed
      By the beating of our hearts
So strong and in sink 
      I need this night
More then I need air
      I need you more then
A poet needs a
    p
      e
          n
An author needs a
    p
      l
        o
            t
Or a singer needs a
    t
        u
          n
              e


                          Be my man
                            Hold my hand
                                  Never let go


          “yes the answer is yes”
  I finely choke out in the place we met
    He slides on the perfect gold band
                                              ontp my thin fingers
                                No man is batter
                                  then this on
                                    Right hear
                                    Right now   

Author notes

im looking forwerd to when this is my day. but i know it will come

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  • Last Hope
    November 8
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    Amazing

    Thats really great. your talented. its very creative. keep it up.


  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 20

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    We all have our day. Hope yours comes soon for you. You did a nice write on how you would like for it to happen. Great job and sensual and full of love. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
    Steve


    • bar room stool
      October 20
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      thanks so much this peace realy came to me and thanks for makeing this contest hope you liked it