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Probably, Most Definitely, Unfinished.

Yearning...
To be let free.
Upon this boat
In the middle of...
Sandusky.
Where I cannot see
And sometimes wish
That I...
Also couldn't feel.

Turning circles,
Round and roud
Here we go,
All aboard.
I'll pay my fare,
twice indeed.
Because I'm...
Mentally,
Emotionally,
Stupidly...
Inclined.

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