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Friends betrayl

Growing up I had a friend
we did everything together
she was my shoulder to lean on
and I was her oak she could stand under

I never thought
in my wildest dreams
that she would turn on me
and stab me in the back

Getting ready to leave
and to searve my country
I asked her to watch over somethings
and she promised she would

I left and went to a foreign country
to do what I had chosse to do
and I knew in my heart that when I returned
everything would become normal again

But alas it was not meant to be
for when I came back
things had changed
and my friend had become different

The attitude she had
was not one I knew
and she had started to do things
that I thought she would never do

She lied to my face
and spit on my love for her
and the things that I thought she had guarded
well they where now in the trash

So many times
I tried to get a hold of her
and she never responded
and doged my attempts

I finally found her
and asked what was going on
and she looked me in the eyes
and told me I meant nothing to her

I was shocked
as tears filled my eyes
here my best friend
turned and walked away from me

This is my betrayl
it may not be so bad
but to me it broke my heart
and made it hard to trust again

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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    October 21

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    Trust is a hard thing to regain once it is lost. People don't seem to realize just how much this can mean to someone. Trust is frgile and strong at the same time. Friendships are not to be thrown away but many times are. I am sorry you had this happen to you.l And you have written it well. The emotions in this piece was very well done. And thank you for serving our country


  • Overlord Darklight
    October 21

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    Sarin.

    ...commenting on anything but the message
    beneath the words would be tactless, at this
    point.

    Betrayals.
    ...soft allegiances.
    (reflects; regarding a similar write)

    Sariana Rayne...
    ...
    (pauses; deep in tumultuous thought)

    Sorceress.
    (frowns heavily)

    ...silence is a friend who will never betray.
    (nods)

    Thank you, Confucius.
    ...I will heed that one for the moment.
    I understand, Sarin.
    ...unfortunately.


  • Brigid-goddess
    October 20

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    What a powerful write...
    The emotion of betrayal and hurt are very tangible and writing this I can almost see the tears in your eyes.
    Your works are always worth reading and I hope you continue...


  • trekkergirl
    October 20

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    I know this write must be very personal for you... just to point this out though you have some misspelled words in it.

    Also, perhaps not only had she changed... however, you think you might have changed as well. I mean here you have visited countries saw sights that you friend hadn't.

    It is possible that she is envious of what you have done and seen.

    But a fact of life is... change.

    Thanks for sharing these very personal feelings with us. I hope that you and your friend become closer once again.