Still waiting,
prince charming come save me,
your princess in distress,
find me, help me,
fix me,
im a mess.
Take the scars,
and tears away,
hold me in your arms,
until the darkest days.
Black ruffled dress,
converse shoes,
my life or yours,
not that hard to choose.
Save me from this life,
this horror in my mind,
grab my hand and lead me,
don't let me fall behind.
Wrap me in your arms,
my heart is yours to hold,
its you I want, come save me,
I'm growing ever cold.
Author notes
IDK haha
idkkk
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The structural choices aren't groundbreaking and the thematic elements walk back and forth across the line of being cliche and not, but sometimes that just doesn't really matter.
This poem is very personal and appears to be quite sincere. I have my own personal reaction to this poem, but hesitate to share it as I do not wish to offend. So if you're curious, ask away, but if not just know that I admire your introspective work in this poem. I wish you all the best!
IC C
ps - have a wonderful Wednesday! (accidental alliteration...
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this is amazing. i feel the same way. i <333333 it. it's so beautifully written.
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A many thanks to you friend.
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Wow I agree with your sister this is fantastic I can't choose one best bit it is all just fantastic. You capture imagery so beautifully
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Wow Annie! This is fantastic! You should write on sicky meds more often! jk. However, this truly is a good poem. You have great rhythm and flow going throughout with a flawless rhyme scheme. And that's not even mentioning that the story you have formed in this poem is fantastic, though behind the upbeat feel of the whole thing it is dripping with sadness. Don't worry your prince charmnig will show up someday
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Ha. Thanks Stephagis. And I tihnk my medfs had somthing to do with it. I just started writing a status on facebook and was like... slrjg;oehgrjg POEM! BAM! Yeah...*cough cough*
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