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Change.Me.Forever

Change.
An altered state of sameness,
A variation on normalcy,
But rarely altogether different.

Me.
A person of thought,
A man with confusion and pain,
Who's striving for Enlightenment.

Forever.
A state of endlessness,
An eternity never ceasing,
And an infinite opportunity for possibility.

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  • WindUpEnigma gold member
    October 28

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    "Change.
    An altered state of sameness," - would you mind if I possibly used this phrase? It's wonderful.
    Good form, well penned.


    • CaptainObvious gold member
      October 28
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      I'm flattered that you'd like to use that phrase. Since you've been so nice, I don't see why not haha. Thanks for all the kind words.