A boy
A childhood friend
A memory in the mirror
A shadow on the playground
Where did the innocence go?
The ever-evasive unconditional love?
Maybe they never really were.
Never at all.
A girl
A love lost
An echo in the distance
A reason for change
A contest entry
- Change...The Life You Know is Gone.. by whits end.
1300 points, ended October 30, 6 entries
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What did you think
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A great read
You know its amazing how a few words really make you think....this is a poem that hits you right where it should...it shoots an emotion through you that makes you question where has all this innocence gone....very good read....keep up the good work -
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Thank you very much!
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great read! your concise style is excellent. you do not waste words and that is an impressive talent, as so many poets (myself included) are prone to verbiage.
cheers!
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Good!
I like this. It is cool how the first 4 lines relate to the last 4, the middle part being a bit of a reflection. Very nicely done. Good luck to you and thanks for entering.
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This was a beautifully written piece. So much loss and so many questions. So many different answers to each of them.
Thanks again for another amazing write (:
-Kati Anne
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