Hearts ever hopeful
Are searching for
Pleasure without
Pain, for truth without lies;
Idyllic ideals unencumbered by
Looks or riches,
Yearning for--
Endings, sculpted from
Visions and dreams, that
Erase the emptiness of the past to
Renew our spirit and lead us through--
All adversity into a
Future beautifully wrought by
Tenderness and thoughtfulness, where each moment
Envelops us in a love that--
Resonates profoundly with the beauty of acceptance.
Author notes
Happily Ever After
Acrostic
A contest entry
- Acrostics Quickie!! by Diminished Capacity.
500 points, ended October 19, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am in total agreement with everyone about your
last line. The entire acrostic is beautiful, and the
last line completes with perfection. This was Gold
in my eyes. Good to read your work again.
Jeannie
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Beautifully penned Bunny and your last line is the clincher. I feel 'Bunny' in that last line
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I absolutely adore that last line. Great job done with this, thank you so much for entering.
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Oh those three words mean so much but even as I read this I didn't know it was an acrostic, you do these so very well C
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You should just Know, Now, I'm totally smitten!
Such a lovely, gently flowing piece of poetry.....
& Blessings, ~ Jan ~
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