Clouds roll
and people stroll.
A relaxing day in the park.
The rain has passed
and left its drops on the grass.
Soon it will get dark.
In the distance a train
hails its refrain.
Three angels sing along.
Cars pass by
and the birds give cry.
Everyone sharing a song.
What did you think
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wow thats really good
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beautiful
Such a peaceful pace that sets for a hopeful tone in the poem, your words are relaxed and casual, luring your audience into a comfortable safe space. Thought it was very refreshing not to read of all doom and gloom. although I would of perhaps liked some first person narrative Just to relate it to someone and personalize it a bit, but that's just my humble opinion thank-you for entering good luck
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I read so few little songs that when i find them i always smile.its a very pretty one too,perfectly sugary sweet.keep up the good work.xxx
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Beautiful. Lyrical, small and quiet; gentle. Everything I was looking for this morning. Thanks for sharing.
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