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No Man's Land

This is no-man’s-land.
Your voice will not be heard here.
So save your meaningless words.

This is no-man’s land.
Your existence will resonate through nature.
The birds and the insects are your only friends here.

This is what its like to be alone.
Alone with your thoughts, alone with the only person you can count on.
Is it everything you had hoped for?

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  • KatherineAnne
    October 20

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    What an intense question. That is something I've often wondered about. This write kind of reminds me of death. It's the same concept. Is the death the answer?
    Or maybe that's what you were getting at.

    I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing this great piece.

    -Kati Anne