verse one: chorus girls and choir boys
are comparing legs in the next room
i'm sitting at my vanity
searching my mouth for the taste of you
its been a few days since we last kissed
and out of all my old comforts
you're the one i miss
and there's a flipped car
down the road, i don't see any survivors
no one waving flags and flares
yelling "help us! we're on fire!"
verse two: its the same drama cliche
same scream and shout
its the same damn bullshit
every girl fights about
and if i didn't know better
i'd say you're one of them
so c'mon and take the risk
this is as bad as it gets
CHORUS: you said
"close your eyes and count to 10
when the light cracks your window
the nightmares will end"
oh you said
"gimme both your hands
i don't want you to wake up alone
again..."
verse three: circus clowns and zombies
are ambling down the street
i'm walking down the carnival row
my eyes on my feet
and there is a ferris wheel
going round and round and round
every time it touches the sky
it also hits the ground
and you know, it could be a metaphor
for life
but life is a roller coaster
or is it a carousel?
i can never remember
CHORUS: you said
"close your eyes and count to 10
when the light cracks your window
the nightmares will end"
oh you said
"gimme both your hands
i don't want you to wake up alone
again..."
(x2)
Author notes
idk. lots of events take place in this one.
working on music.
assume nothing
Comments
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i really like this. it's pretty amazing.
i especially like verse three and the chorus.
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I like this. It flows well. I think it's interesting the way you've used several events which all have their own story.
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finally a new one!!!
I like it. I think it's cool the way there's so many events.
I miss youuuu<3 -
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haha. i bet you were waiting for one
thanks :] the music is proving difficult cuz i can't figure anything thats really dark enough for the tone i set this in...maybe i should try the piano instead of guitar? hmmm...
anyway...i miss you too. a lot <3 -
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haha I was! I kept checking but, alas, nothing.
I'm sure you can do it! you're amazing!
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