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Is Anyone Up There?

Is anyone up there? Can you hear me?
I'm lost, God, so unmistakeably lost.
Please, I'll do anything for anyone.
Get my family out of this, I beg of you.
Please someone, still these rebel seas.
I'm not joking; Oh no, this is not fun.

Is anyone up there? Please say yes..
We need you badly, don't you freaking see?
Our dreams are torn at the seams
My hopes once raised have crashed.
Do you think this is funny? I'm not laughing.
We've been beaten, hated, and eternally bashed.
Do you even give a damn? Why don't you answer?

I used to send foolish little wishes up to you.
Hoping you'd answer, just a little sign.
But, Hell, I'm starting to believe you're not true.
Anyone would, too, if you'd abandoned them
Like you have me and my family.
I don't think I trust you anymore. If there is a You.

Hello? Is anyone up there? Please answer me now...

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  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    October 19

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    I like to believer there is someone up there
    Watching over us and hearing our prayers
    Sometimes prayers are answered
    Others go unheard

    But the thing I refused to do most
    Is give of believing that there is hope
    The answers you seek might not come today
    But given time, I believe he does have mercy

    For god never gives us more then we can bared
    Some how blindly we have to trust
    Each thing that happens bad
    Is satans work

    Some of my prayers have been answer
    I have a home to rest my head upon a pillow
    There is food even though not much
    But its enough just to get me by

    All I know is how much my heart goes out to you
    I personally wish I had it in my power to help
    The best I can offer is a shoulder for you
    And my love as you are a dear friend

    Forever and always, shall I keep you in prayers
    My promise is this I will try my best to be that friend
    So dear and the listen when every you need me
    If it helps you some I am glad

    Your true happiness is all I ll ever want for you
    Loves ya dearly xoxo

    • You've fullfilled the persona of my dear friend. I hold you dear to my heart when I feel sad. Your poems to me I read over and over; expecially when I felt my time will come to an end. I have had many of them answered; much the same as you: Food, a roof over my head, clothes -though they might be tattered and worn-. I hope and wish nothing but happiness and the end of the hardships for you, for it shan't be to late for such a wonderful soul. You're in God's good Grace for sure, my dear friend.

      Love

      Izzy xoxo