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when i remember

it hasnt gotten easier
time still hasnt healed this wound
i still cry when i remember
that you wont be home when i get there

i still cry a lot these days
i hoped it would subside
but it hasnt

your birthdays coming soon
we're all here
with no where to send our love

it hasnt been the same since you left
i dont think it ever will be

i know we never talked much
but we had gotten close when i went home
we laughed so much
and talk till the early morning

i wish i had done it sooner
i wish i could have said goodbye
i should have said goodbye



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  • tjayrush gold member
    October 26

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    'Remeber' (in the title) and 'ealry' are spelled wrong. This is a sad poem. Sorry about that. I've been there. I can tell you that after a while (long time) the tears will subside a little bit. Writing helps. It helped me.


    • lost-in-yesterday
      October 26
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      thanks for the spell check i am always forgetting. and thanks for reading. i keep waiting for it to get easier