I have laced our love
with something special.
In it lies the proof
of my unending allegiance.
Even when the shadows of time
creep in on our fleshy confines;
and the petals in your gardens
fade away.
The embers of my love
will forever be ablaze.
Author notes
Prompt 1: A Rose May Die But My Love Will Live Forever
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Now that's classic!
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yaaaaay!!! i'm so glad you dropped by brova. that's a generous comment. one luv man!
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yaaaaay!!! i'm so glad you dropped by brova. that's a generous comment. one luv man!
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yaaaaay!!! i'm so glad you dropped by brova. that's a generous comment. one luv man!
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yaaaaay!!! i'm so glad you dropped by brova. that's a generous comment. one luv man!
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yaaaaay!!! i'm so glad you dropped by brova. that's a generous comment. one luv man!
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hey tj... its so nice to read from you after a long time.
i loved your title "embers of love" goes very well with this wonderful write... a mortals immortal love
best of luck in the contest
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hey abuyi, thanks for the comment. my absence was due to a terribly long writer's block. it's good to be back!
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Wow this was really good. I especially like the lines: creep in on our fleshy confines;
and the petals in your gardens
fade away.
Thanks so much for entering. Keep up the good work!~ -
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thank you for the prompt, it really helped me recover my writing. i'm also glad you liked it. thanks once again.
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