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Ebony Feathers~



Midnight chill - soft
ebony feathers glow.

Crows laugh falls-

onto lilted stars of laughter,

once gaged impossible.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Draig aine gold member
    October 19
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    yes this is stunning imagery I like very much