In his eyes, I am perfect.
I have no flaws, and I am beautiful.
In his eyes, I am smart.
I know all, I am a lady.
In his heart, I'm the only.
The beat and the rhythem
I am his only.
In his heart, I am his alone.
And he is mine.
In his eyes I could never fail.
I could never fall short.
Because in his eyes, I am perfect.
I am flawless, and I am beautiful.
But I guess in God's eyes, we all are.
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Funny thing with me is that after attending a Christian College, and losing the love of my life, I came to see that perhaps my faith isn't as strong as I once though, so the whole concept of "god" in this makes me kind of not like it. But the beginning sounded very loving. Not much to say, it doesn't have a lot of depth, but it gets the idea across in a way that is simple and easy to understand. You spelled rhythm wrong in line 6. I think that was the only error.
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strenght in faith
we all go through our doubts in faith and are either strenghtened or lost
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