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Special Day - Wedding


I remember when I was a little girl
I'd put on my mittens and run out the door
Dance and laugh among the falling flakes
I wouldn't locked up no more

I remember thinking that the snowflakes
Were the prettiest little things I'd seen
Now I see my wedding ring
And think my eyesight wasn't so keen

I'm strutting down the petal-covered aisle
And slowly right up to you
I remember just staring into your eyes
Nearly shouting, "Yes, I do!"

I'll stand by you forever and beyond
Because I'll love you for that long
Hold my close and kiss me softly
As they sing the wedding song

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Oh, congratulations to her!

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  • daviscth silver member
    October 29

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    Thank you for taking time to share this poem for Danielle's wedding. I love the imagery and the giddy sense of happiness that your words bring.


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 19

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    Lovely piece you have penned
    This is so charming
    The rhyme and flow is splendid as well
    Love the reflections on life
    Very well done
    Thank yo for honoring my daughter's wedding with this poem
    I really do appeciate you
    Wish you the best in the contest
    David