Nature painted a rare picture,
and my eyes tasted its beauty.
The kingly poise of the sun
soaked me in all its splendour.
Giving strength to my amazed heart.
A legion of stars adorned the canvas of the skies;
and the moon graced the clouds,
with her regal presence.
Sweeping my heart off its feet.
I let out a silent scream of awe,
as i drowned in the glory
of nature's masterpiece.
Author notes
i hope it fits your requirements.
A contest entry
- Your Own Expressive Take (short verse) by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended October 23, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i really like how you always relate or express the feminine side of things. Its very sharp observation to do and you always amaze me by your ease. I love nature poems.. i find them very soothing as i live in a desert greenery is something my eyes never get enough off,
i feel this ability is your specialty or i say your signature... something unique.
congrats on the green.. this is indeed a very beautiful read.
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nicely expressed, thank you for joining in this contest
good luck
Linda
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aww...thank you Linda. i'm happy you liked it...and thanks for the honourable mention.
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