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Nature's Painting

Nature painted a rare picture,
and my eyes tasted its beauty.
The kingly poise of the sun
soaked me in all its splendour.
Giving strength to my amazed heart.
A legion of stars adorned the canvas of the skies;
and the moon graced the clouds,
with her regal presence.
Sweeping my heart off its feet.
I let out a silent scream of awe,
as i drowned in the glory
of nature's masterpiece.

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  • T.P.Essex
    October 24

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    Excellent - there's a wealth of imagery here you don't often see. The natural world is precious indeed. Great work