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Floating



Exhaling, inhaling...
Feel as the spinning -
Darkness brings me
                            ...down

A feathery touch,
Did I imagine it,
Was there someone
                           ...stroking?

Smells strawberries -
Gelatin and hope,
What an odd aroma.

Body wrapped with -
Emotions I can not -
Recognise or tell
                     ...apart

Floating above,
Lost myself, my -
Body to the
               ...Sensation

 

 

 

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  • i think this is the first time i have seen you write like this, and i have to say really wow, this was a great read, i mean that, keep it flowing