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Blinded by the Pink Light of Love

I am a perfect being of love
Pink light surrounds me
Infiltrating the air that I breathe
Reminding me that I am love.

You are a perfect being of love
It's power is infiniate
Encircling you with it's protection
Sadness and fear fail to penetrate

We are all perfect beings of love
Negativity is temporary and will not kill us
Pink light connects us all
Reminding us that we are love. 

Author notes

I found myself chanting "I am a perfect being of love" while I was meditating today. I don't know where it came from but it made me feel so peaceful.

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 24

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    Lots of power in this poem. I think this is great: 'Negativity is temporary and will not kill us'. Thank you for entering 'The Power of Affirmations' contest.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 20

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    i am not going to say anything here, but this was a strong and interesting read, i know i enjoyed it a lot, and it has a good message, keep it flowing

  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 20
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    I love this. Raw inspiration makes the best poetry.


  • nous. gold member
    October 19

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    interesting, i liked this quite a lot. The whole color of pink is an interesting choice of the many colors. Also in the middle stanza towards the end i think you meant "and" not "adn" otherwise lovely piece:]