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Sting



For it stings every time I -
Close my eyes to escape,
To be with you once more.

And as the mother earth -
Cries my tears I am feeling -
Helpless and alone, lost.

For I do not know my place,
And this world will not -
Show me where I belong.

For it stings every time I -
Close my eyes to rest,
Trying not to think of you.


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  • are you are right, i mean this poem is honestly strong and emotional, i am hoping that this is just a poem, keep it flowing.