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Aimless

Who really knows
Where I'm going
At this point
I guess I can't complain
But for someone like me
Who craves direction
And reassurance
It's not easy floating by on
Loose goals
Possible outcomes
And
A lack of Promises

Author notes

I think I'm getting better at just writing what I feel. This one literally took less than three minutes.

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  • Angel-of-Chaos
    October 20

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    Wow thats definately weird, I was just sitting here pondering the same things myself. You put it beautifully into words, "loose goals, possible outcomes and lack of promises." Thats for sure. It is really hard to move forward when you are not clear on where you are going.... Awesome write!

  • humble1
    October 19
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    nice write

    think most of us can relate...i wouldnt change a thing its perfect the way it is


  • petalblue2
    October 19
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    I feel this way a lot of the time. This is a clear, concise expression of this


  • Simply Olivia
    October 19
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    I can relate to this poem in a very personal way.