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Clique








A circle, not closed
but only facing inward
    shall never be completed, for
  no more is drawn upon the edges
when all attention is on the center.

So it is with humans
  in their cliques, circles, and groups
In complete because of looking inward
and never gazing outward
to see others
  who would fill the gaping holes.







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It's a sad thing how people ignore those around them...

-thefallout
www.theeverlastingfallout.com/read

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  • just mercedes gold member
    October 19

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    I found this interesting, for your thoughts on the circle, how it faces in and out at the same time. It encloses and excludes. "no more is drawn upon the edges" is a nice image for me.