All the little things
the ones you wish to keep
you put them up
and lock them away
these are the things you love
Your very first kiss with me
and every warm feeling
the ones that came from within
you hide them from the world
and you store them
those are the things you love
And you keep everything you hold so dear
and you lock away your every fear
and you put your feelings aside
When will you unlock your heart
Open up and let me see
understand that I only want to help
Unlock the way into your love
and let me take care of you
Author notes
Promt: Nirvana- Heart Shaped Box
A contest entry
- The soundtrack of your life by Enrinye.
700 points, ended October 23, 21 entries
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Comments
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a very sweet emotional write...it is written like a pledge to a loved one...it can be really hard to look inside someone and especially when it comes to feelings we like to know and get a feedback from our partner...I had a boyfriend who was like this and even after several talks he couldn't open up to me and just TALK with me, that's one of the main reasons why he's my ex...hope it will work out better between the two of you...
take care
Suza -
beautiful!!
i love the way you wrote it...very sweet
"Open up and let me see
understand that I only want to help
Unlock the way into your love
and let me take care of you"
my favorite part...a lot of people are too afraid to trust
gd luck in the contest !
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What a beautiful plea... Loved the way you wrote this... Its really beautiful...
Good luck in the contest...
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