I don't know much about love
You said.
(And you took my hand in yours
And traced my life
With roughened fingertips,
Until you reached my end)
But I know this:
(And you pointed to
A junction in the lines -
A sweeping, strong,
Determined interruption
In my palm)
I am yours
Author notes
Option 4. Poem I used for inspiration is 'You said Is' by ee cummings. Beautiful poem 
. And Im sorry about the ending of the poem. I always seem to start off well, then lose inspiration half way through! But I gave it my best shot!
a-face-in-the-crowd x
A contest entry
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Dear a face in the crowd
First of all, I spotted you.
Second of all, I am Adamastor.
Third of all, I score three.
Fourth of all, can only affor done.
Fifth of all, only count comment as score.
Sixth of all, Bye.
Adamastor.
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P.S. I do apologise for rushing this comment, as I am suffering from an upset stomach and on this particular occaision I need to dash to the toilet quick. For an example of what this comment would have looked like, please feel free to look at any other comments I have made under the link "comments" in my profile.
Thanks again.
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I'm confused... I'd like to say thanks... but I'm not sure if this is meant to be complimentary!
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Hey, before I comment on this,
I need your ap name in your AN, please
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I always do that too, start off well and loose inspiration, I always just put the pad down and come back to it later. I know it's more difficult when your writing on a time limit, so well done anyway.
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