When the sun falls
look up at the sky
as beautiful as ever
we exist without light
misanthropes unite
let the truth unfurl
a most wondrous sight
the core of the world
Author notes
this poem has many meanings. i had i different mindset when i wrote it but even after five minutes the meaning of it for me was different. it is very universal and is open for correction!
A contest entry
- Your Own Expressive Take (short verse) by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended October 23, 21 entries
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be honest. im not one to get mad at criticism...i just want help. how will i improve if you don't tell me what's wrong?? please and thank-you!!
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to me this was full of direct force of the universe, thank you for joining in good luck
Linda
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