You say don't love me, but
I've seen your eyes when you
look at me. I know they light
up.
Without your love, I could
die. What I would give to
be your yours? I love you.
Without your love, I'd kill
myself.
I know your fighting your
feelings for me. Everytime you
hug me, I know. What I want to
know is why, why can't you give
into love?
Without your love, I could
die. What I would give to
be your yours? I love you.
Without your love, I'd kill
myself.
All it takes is one word, and
I'll be yours. Just call my name
and my love is yours to keep
forever.
Everytime I sleep, you're there.
When I wake up, your my first thought.
You're with me where ever I go.
Without your love, I could
die. What I would give to
be your yours? I love you.
Without your love, I'd kill
myself.
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This is honestly a brilliant piece, no doubts about that. I really enjoyed reading it, has a lot of expression of emotions which is great. I'm not really sure about this so if you could correct me if I'm wrong here but in stanza two line one, 'your' I thought the word 'you're' would be the right one but I'm not sure so please let me know? Good work though I loved i
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No, I wasn't meaning you are, but it does fit in certain contexts
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