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Sparks Ignite

Romantic encounter
party of two,
room at the top
with excellent view.

Chocolate laced bubbles,
tequila spiked drink.
Hold your breath now
don't even blink.

Red satin sheets,
black silk gown,
just off the shoulder,
sliding down.

A kiss that begins
at her toes,
finally ends,
at the tip of her nose;
two lips engage
becoming one,
sparking flames,
flicking tongue.

Heat engulfs,
fire consumes,
flames extinguished,
love blooms.





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Prompt Women Only. Romance, Sensual

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  • penman gold member
    October 29
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    Excellent

    What a terrific write. So very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 20

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    This is very good and sensual and full of love. I like the metaphors you used as well and the flow was good. Keep on penning like this. You did great. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
    Steve


  • sinfull
    October 20
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    excellent, poet! got the images all the way through, a very smooth read. sensual to perfection. =)


  • arafura gold member
    October 19
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    Wow... very sensual indeed. Great work poet!