Love, how it is abused.
The thought, idea, the feeling.
Are you amused?
The lies, the stories, the hurt.
How could you do this to me?
Your scent, still clings to my shirt.
I love you, that I truly mean.
What could have possibly gone wrong?
I thought it wasn't true, but now I've seen.
You tell me you love me.
But you are simply not "in love",
Your voice, I hear in it; glee.
I do not know where to go from here,
I find it so hard to move on.
My love, who I held so dear,
Is now gone.
I cannot find another to take your place.
I'll always miss you, but you are a stranger.
No longer that handsome, wonderful face.
I sensed it from the start, warning: DANGER!
How could you have done this to me now?
After all I've done,
What made you decided and how?
This is the mile marker to how far we've come.
To live this lie for so long.
I didn't know it could be.
But, you proved me wrong, oh so wrong.
I'll live in misery.
So I must say that I cannot go on,
With you by my side?
An idiotic thought, I realized at the crack of dawn.
We are done, not another free ride.
I ask you please one simple thing,
To forget and move on.
Be happy and sing,
This tragic, deceitful song.
Please tell me what you think
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Hello my friend, I'm sorry to hear of this tragedy and your misery. I would say that it hurts most when they almost seem glad to be rid of you. I love structure of the poem and the length of it, it gives enough insight and finalizes the message. Again I hope things get better soon. peace ~Triss
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good write. i can relate to the feelings you put into this piece, and they are very true and honest. keep it up
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Will is a noob!
jk buddy
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I thought, for a long time, that I was truly meant to be with the woman I just broke up with.
I used to say, "No matter how dark things may be, worry not child, the sun always rises."
Just for cynical abuse, life threw her my way. Her name is Dawn.
I was so loving, so caring, and all of me was for her with a passionate heart.
'til something happened. I don't know what it was, but there was a wall.
Nothing. So many lies poured from her. Such apathy. Such deciet.
She tried to play games, but I knew better. She didn't succede there, just hurt me more that she would try.
I do honestly understand how you feel.
I'm sorry that it would happen to you.
I know, from what I knew of you at least, you're very genuine.
Your emotion is, anyway.
I cannot apologize for anything the human filfth of this world would do,
But I truly wished better for you.
I'm just sorry there's not more I could say or do.
~Kyle
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Thanks, I appreciate your comment and all.
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I'm sorry I went into all of that with my situation.
Still, like I said, I do understand.
And I know it's been a while,
But I do still care.
Good people are hard to find.
Granted, 'good' is a relitive term, and mine is very different from mosts, but...
Aye, you get the point.
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