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Bliss


    There;  far in the corner; I sit and predict the past

Try as I may it escapes me; such as the prism spins in the sun

The feeling overwhelms; positively radiating.....euphoric

Tryst....no...not a secret; a pulse in the rapture you once embraced

Turned from you; scorned by your saddened attempts at playing wife;

The arms of another; opened awaiting the presence of her soulmate; for there is such a thing afterall

Trickles & rivulets of tears stream down my cheeks; promises of seduction dance in my mind

There is a secret; not long for this memory; a piece of ourselves is growing inside me

Trying to remain calm; knowing the perfection that is a child is at its merest beginning

True to your promises; I am the happiest woman in the world.....you have given me your life and your love

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Prompt: 10 line...each beginning with the letter T....and each line containing a word beginning with P

This write holds true to the feelings I am overwhelmed with; we believe we are pregnant

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  • The FaeQueen
    November 2
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    Very deep. the emotion just gives life to the poem. So very sweet.
    Good Luck!