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~Judgement Day~

Judgement day?

Heh heh heh...

Do I fear it? (I have
played God with the lives of
my victims.)

Hell no!

Should I fear it? (You ask
me while I have stared at death
through the tears of my victims.)

Hell no!

Did I do all this in spite?
Hate? Heh...you are the shrink
here, so you tell me.

I sure the hell wasn't thinking
about judgement day when I was
spilling the blood of the innocent.

Don't be so sure that they
were all innocent.

He?
He wasn't so innocent.
He was a killer, much like me.
Only he was different...

Troubled...

He played with his victims.

But...

he was fake.

He lacked the heart to truely kill.

I wanted to find him,
to teach him first hand what it
was like to take life away
from another, what it felt like
to play God.

Ooohhh!

I can feel the rush, the
adrenaline now, as if he was
here now, as if I was God and
he was my lamb to slaughter.

There was but only one challenge
to this....

Hell, I was up for a good one too.

I had to find him;
but in this case...

I let him find me.

Heh heh! That was easier
than I thought it would be,
much easier than it should have been.

You talk about judgement day.
About remorse and how I have sinned.
You don't get it, you don't
understand...

I AM GOD!

I played with his mind. This
was way too easy. His only chance
for survival, were his blades.
He used them on all his victims.
And now...

Heh Heh!

Now, he was going to feel
exactly what his victims felt.

PAIN...there would
be much for him. I would see to it
that he learned from the best.

SUFFERING...oooh the
pain that he endured. The torture
of knowing that he had lost control,
and that he was about to
be...

just another statistic.

He knelt in front of me,
pleading for his life. Begging me
to set him free. Free from the
chains that kept him in place.

How pathetic...

I don't think he listened
to his victims when they pleaded
and begged for their lives.
Why should I spare his miserable
life?

I never listened before.

I watched with a smile
as he bled out.
I laughed as the opening
in his throat releaed his blood
like an open flood gate.
As his blood covered the
chains that kept him bound.

This was;

after all...

Judgement day.

Author notes

Background by LadyDementia...thank you






This is a continuation from my story ~Memoires of Murder~

Part 1
Empty Carcass
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3848603



Part 2
~Birth of a Killer~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3924763



Part 3

~The Suffering~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3944421

Part4

~A Voice Without Reasoning~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4004399


Part 5

~My Masterpiece~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4010999


Part 6

~Trick or Treat~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4702575


Part 7

~My Madness~

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4765093

Part 9
~Benediction~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5830803


For the record, I have never killed nor intend to kill anyone this is pure FICTION


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  • Erotik Rose silver member
    October 22, 2009
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    Very dark write, sick and twisted and a great installment to youe series.
    I love you Elizabeth


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 22, 2009

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    An excellent instalment hunni! You can feel his insanity twisting and turning as you read, he's a real nut job..lol. Imagery is gory, vivid and oh so very dark! A superb read. The only stall for me was line 14, I think it should be I'm. I am just doing the BG now, so will link you in a mo. Can't wait to read more


    • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
      October 22, 2009

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      Thank you so much for the comment and the awesome BG...I really appreciate it.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 19, 2009

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    This is sooo way cool!
    I LOVE LOVE LOVE dark writes and so appropriate with Halloween coming up!
    All the very best to you, my friend!
    Rock on!!
    Love,
    Sandy


  • SatuRn Grotesk
    October 19, 2009

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    How sickly twisted!

    I love the flow of this. And the imagery was very much vivid in my mind. I could see the killer simply sitting back talking to a shrink. See the flashbacks of kills he made. See the laughter dancing in his eyes.

    This is truly a great piece. Good Luck!

    SatuRn


    • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
      October 19, 2009
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      Thank you...glad you enjoyed this little installment..
      It's been a while since I wrote any of these.


  • Never-Better25
    October 19, 2009
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    Sorry, I forgot to include my applause...


  • Never-Better25
    October 19, 2009

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    WOW!

    So much imagery! Very vivid, but it flows so well. A dark write indeed! I enjoyed the way it made me feel as though I was listening to an interrogation...The confessions of a killer. Thank you for sharing this brilliant write! I liked it!

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