I’ll travel to foreign and distant lands.
See the sites, that is my plan.
When? When will you travel to foreign and distant lands,
See the sites, fulfill your plan?
Someday…someday.
Renew acquaintances with my old friends,
With those I’ve offended make amends.
When? When will you renew acquaintances with old friends,
With those offended make amends?
Someday…someday.
Give of my time to those in need,
Give of my charity the hungry to feed.
When? When will you give your time to those in need,
Give of your charity the hungry to feed?
Someday…someday.
Captain a sailboat across the waves,
Follow new paths that the Spirit paves.
When? When will you captain a sailboat across the waves,
Follow new paths that the Spirit paves?
Someday…someday.
I’ll be dying, you know, leaving this earth,
Ending the days I’ve counted since birth.
When? When will you die and leave this earth,
End the days you’ve counted since birth?
Someday…someday.
In a list
A contest entry
- Changes you want to make in your life by daviscth.
400 points, ended October 26, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BWOW~~Best Write of the Week #25 by islekine.
700 points, ended October 24, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Marvelous
Aww, someday, to be sure so well expressed. Such a great glimpse at life. Best of luck in the contest
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I liked this nice write for our contest thanks for taking the time to enter our contest best wishes to you always be well.
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Oh yes! That infamous "someday"
Just do it! lol....thanks for sharing your talent...
I enjoyed your poem...don't put off...that which you want..
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
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I love this form, the rhyme is great and your some day some day is brilliantly penned
with a lot of thought within it..
I wish you all the best in this contest
Julie
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This is very creative and a sweet piece of poetry very lyrical and somewhat spiritual too.
thank you for sharing this Katie and I hope you will captain a sailboat well before you depart the earth.
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I love this!!! You've created a wonderful poem and managed top put into words what a lot of us have on our mind. Thank you for taking part.
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Katie, this is really great stuff...extremely original, I love the recurring 'echo' in between every stanza...it's as though you are conversing with yourself...very thought provoking indeed...awesomely different and refreshing absolutely love it!
John
I would love you to read my poem 'Somewhere'
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