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what if you were right?

i miss spending the time
like we always used to
holding the other's hand
where nobody knew
touching your hair
and seeing you smile
getting your love
and not your denial
and i know we're too young
and i know we're too dumb
and some days it seems
like we'll never be done
but the only thing that hurts more
than having you as a friend
is the thought that i might
never see you again

Author notes

this medication infatuation has put a stop on my brain;;
will the words ever come knocking again?

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  • crystalmeth
    October 19

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    a love lost is a hole gained.
    I hope yours is filled soon;
    losing someone to share time with, whether secret or public is nothing short of devastating when its so strong.
    I hope you see them again.

    either way, great great poem.
    I like the line;
    "holding the other's hand
    where nobody knew"
    very private, very meaningful, just a handhold.

    wonderful writing from Miss Flowers<3