angel wings at an angle of 45
suffocating the strands of life
cutting them little by little
with my last breath
i'll say your name
i'll confess how much
i love you
and with my last breath
illness seeps through my
ever so damaged veins
but still i'll say
i love you
Author notes
The Pondering Panda.. "god is a sock" 愉快 鬚 says:
"Lying here so close to death
I say your name with my last breath
I close my eyes and think of you
Theres nothing left for me to do"
sams idea. my poem.
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i really like this it's rerally good
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thanks.
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good peice, very descriptive and full of deep emotion. Love it actually! good penning!
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awh thank you!
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I love you too, now pass the coffee pot, will ya?
with my last breath I'll say I think you'd be worried about other things, like whether you have clean undies on before anyone finds your body.
Im kidding. this is a little over the top I think, with drama-maybe that's the way it's supposed to read. Feels like the line in a Shakespeare play, albeit, without Old English. I love his plays, the drama is appropriate-so if that's what you were going for, I'd say right on the money
love,
jin
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mhm, melodrama ^_^ though i was thinking more first silent movies, where the lady is always saved by the handsome gentleman... but similiar stuff ^_^ thankies!!
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thanks love.
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woot. I like this one love!!! Someone needs to send some ideas my way lol
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lol thanks baby ^_^ oh i got plenty of id.... oh you meant for poetry?
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another good one
you seem to do better with my ideas then I do! its unfair
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lmao! i know, its great!!
cheers me dear.
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