a pink tinted sky
silently cries
flying higher into its horizon
it flies and loves the freedom
yet like icarus
the wax wings melt
it crashes back into the world
and with a thud dies
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ive hired sam [for free] so that i steal his ideas and make them mine.
"I dreamt a dream that I could fly, but didnt try to fly too high, for fear I would fall and die"
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poet a glimpse of reality the hard way. excellent short decription of the truth in life. well penned.
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thank you.
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Nice idea here that is for certain, who in thier right and proper mind would take flight with wax wings.
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icarus and dedaus [sp] flew with wings made of wax and feathers. it worked. icarus flew too close to the sun so the wax melted. but his teacher survived.
thanks for the kind comment.
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i agree.. nice write!
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thanky!
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woooo I like it! short but gooood
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awh thanky!
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