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Granny's term

My grandmother left early today
She said she was going for a  medical extermination.

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  • bird at rose
    October 26

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    HAHAHAHAHA this made me laugh out loud...

    in a very truthful way. "medical extermination" instead of 'examination' seems to be the title they deserve by their factions (translate derived by their actions). Rather than being known for teaching, which is the meaning of doctor, they think the easiest is to remove ~ which it is, but then they keep taking more parts out because of never naturally stopping the sorrowful source. My grandma also went to a chiropractor to supposedly get help on her aching back, and they made it worse. She said she screamed. Evidently it wasn't one using nutrition as an arm, embodying how we were made in vulnerability which has equivalence now, but first-aid in their mind.

    Funny to think I like this better than ALL of the winners,
    bird


  • suecat
    October 25
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    O my! Very funny! Did she meet my mum looking for her euthanasia?!


  • Thata
    October 20
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    thank you! she returned with no broken bones


  • Melodies
    October 19

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    YIKES!

    Oh, dear Granny... I do hope she returns with everything intact. lol So DARLING! I love it when poets talk funny. Oh, I DO and you DID!