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I Beg For Punishment

I'm withering
without your touch, I fade to nothing
Without your punishment, I stray.
Let me feel your strength overtake my own,
let me feel your power.
On my knees, I beg
I beg for the crack of the whip
for the marks, for the bruises
For your hands to be wrapped around my neck.
I beg for punishment.
Take my body, make me scream.
Chain me, restrain me
I can take the pain.
Use me, abuse me
Black, blue and glowing.
Leave me battered, leave me beaming.

I beg for punishment.

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  • spideracer gold member
    October 31

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    I would love to try kinky one day, and to have a slave would be awesome I think. Your poem is well done and sexy as hell, that is if you find hell sexy. There's something enticing about wanting to be punished, makes the blood boil even for some. Full of kinky imagery, dark and sensual at the same time. Take care now and good luck in contest.


  • zee91190
    October 31

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    Talk about being kinky!!

    When I mentioned sensual in my contest page, it didnt even strike me that it does include kink! Ok admitted that many people would not find bdsm very turning on, but its a huge turn on for me.
    I love the way you've written this poem.
    "Let me feel your strength overtake my own,
    let me feel your power."
    Damn! doesnt that make you so hot? just to feel your man's raw strength, knowing full-well that he's strong enough to ruin you, feeling that strength and yet you trust him enough to know he wont. That is the beauty of bondage!Otherwise its just rape.
    Immensly enjoyed this take on the prompt. Excuse me while I go invite my boyfriend over
    Thanks for entering my contest

    All the best

  • mcfreeman
    October 21
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    naughty girls....mmmmm....

    will get that which they wish...

  • JToddUnderhill
    October 19

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    Nice poem

    ..... I feel that way sometimes about my relationship. Funny how symbolisim works in poetry. Beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder, and this is one good write!

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