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Because; I Never Can Thank Her Enough.

Because:
  You've shown, through the bad times and the good, I can rely on You.
Whether you're helping me celebrate or there to commiserate. You're always by my side.

Because:
You've shown me so much Love and Respect, much more than I probably deserve.
Through all the darkness,You are always holding the Guiding Light.

Because:
You've given me the Family I never Knew
and the
Hope and Strength
to
Want to beat this.

Because:
Now,
I'm
Strong Enough to Survive,

Because:
Of
Your Friendship.

Author notes

Because;
I've recently been diagnosed with stomach cancer and even with her own shit going on Louise is always there

Because;
Her and her beautiful daughter have made me part of their family

Because;
I never can Thank her enough.

Louise;
I Love You Mumsy
Thank You


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Comments

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  • Virgoan
    October 26

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    This is rich in its simplest form. I like how heartfelt and true the poem has been.

    Thanks for sharing.

    HENSLEY


  • February Moon gold member
    October 22
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    This is beautifully rich in emotion.


  • loud whispers
    October 19

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    that is beautiful, we should always acknowledge the people that make a difference in our lives and you have done this the best possible way... thro poetry.
    am sorry to hear about yer diagnosis, hope there is something that can be done. all the best
    xxxx


  • LaylaLace
    October 19

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    Besides the spelling error for "whether," and your use of ; instead of : your poem is very touching, and it's worth letting her read it. She must be a great friend.
    Here's hoping you two the best!


  • Olivias Violin
    October 19

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    Wonderful

    Wishing you all the best

  • sweetyj84
    October 19

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    Wow, what can i say! No one has even written anything about or for me before! There's no way i was able to hold the tears back with that one. I honestly can not describe how thats made me feel. Just blessed to know you is all i can say right now! Love You to, and Thank you! xoxoxoxoxox

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