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And I can promise

If you left,
It’s not your fault
Guilt eats hard,
Wounds pained with salt
And kicking out and beating down,
And screaming as you fall, so loud
Chasing eagles from the sky
Holding onto hopes so high
Cos fire burns, and fires heal
So let me tell you what I feel
Cos its not blame I'm casting here
What I'm showing isn't fear
Doubt’s not planted with this seed
That basic almost easy need
Ill tell you now that I don't blame
And reassure that I don't hate
To say that,
Baby, I’m ok,
And promise that that’s how I’ll stay.

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