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i <3 you so.

I secretly love you from afar
yet you only see me as a friend.
Your personality shines as bright as a star
to your every whim i tend

I wanted to make you mine
for it is you i desire
to be beside you for all time
to help you get what you require

you held my hand late at night
texted me 'til three
the feelings you'd excite
would end up costing me

for once the show was over
you just turned your back
find your next clover
and, once again, you'd attack

still when i see your name,
it may seem pathetic,
to have my body aflame
and turn me all poetic.

And so i hope you now know
that it is you that makes my face glow
and makes the world around me slow
all because i love you so.




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  • missprissy808
    October 19
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    that was great

    that was great because it happened to me once. I wish I had the talent you hav


    • from eden
      October 22
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      aww thank you

      i really appreciate the fact that you took the time to read my poetry.