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idfk anymore...

She reaches out for help,
Only to be grasped by weak hands.
She cries out in agony,
Hoping for that savior filled with light.
She looks at those near,
And wonders how they can not see.
She looks in her eyes,
Seeing the pain and sorrow with ease.
She looks at those near,
In hope that they will help her heal.
She realizes she is alone,
And can only laugh at the fact that is now known.
She sees there is no hope,
Only the darkness is left for her mind.
She thinks of getting a blade,
Then she considers a gun instead.
Her will to die is strong,
But the thought of hurting others makes her hesitate.
She wants to die,
Be free of the chains keeping her from the sky.
She wants to be free,
But it seems that was never her destiny...

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  • Disguising Mask
    October 25

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    awesome write

    omg its been so long since ive read your work i should be ashamed...that was an awesome poem and i could really relate to it...keep writing and keep your chin up...the grass is greener on the other side


  • Wulf-Eyez De Winter gold member
    October 19

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    hun....if only i had known...


    I miss you my Roli

    Love always,
    Mother Wulf


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 19

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    i am hoping that this is just a poem for you, i am hoping, keep it flowing


  • Cyril Huntinghawk
    October 19

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    Hmm, whats wrong?

    It was great by the way.

    • Devoted Huntress
      October 19
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      Thanks and many things are wrong lately. I just do not feel like I belong anywhere anymore. XD Oddly enough, it seems rather funny to me.

      • Cyril Huntinghawk
        October 19
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        Haha, well maybe your just taking a laugh at it.

        You know what they say, when life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave them wondering how the hell you did it! xD


        • Devoted Huntress
          October 19
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          lmao you are so weird hun

          • Cyril Huntinghawk
            October 19
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            Hellls yeah.

            Oh yeah, one more thing. Avoid the movie Paranormal Activities. T_T So scary I'm nawshus.

            And I dunno how to spell that. >.> Get Amber in here or something later. xD


            • Devoted Huntress
              October 19
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              nauseous*

              and my POOR Little Brother! Scared of a movie :3

              ~huggles~ XD


              • Cyril Huntinghawk
                October 19
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                That movie was the shit though. I'd reccomend you watch it but you'd poop yer pants. xD


                • Devoted Huntress
                  October 19
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                  I don't get scared by movies Little Brother :3

                  • Cyril Huntinghawk
                    October 19
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                    I never got scared by movies either! It's scary shit. xD

                    But stop teasing me! Don't. Make. Me, Mosh You,

                    I'm totally in the mood for it too. >.>

                    THOUGHT I DIED IN MY SLEEP LAST NIGHT! (LAST NIGHT!)
                    BUT IT WAS JUST WISHFUL THINKING!
                    THE PAIN BUILDS BEHIND MY EYES,
                    SO I WILL JUST KEEP ON DRINKING!



                    E> E> E> E> E> Shadows Fall! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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