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Red

It starts…

Lust,
Lipstick,
Sin City.

Wine staining the
Carpet which they
Indulged in their
Painted passion.

Until…

Hatred,
Heartbeat,
Bordello.

Pain thickens the
Cherry filled air
As all Hell
Is released.

Finally…

Power,
Scarlet,
Death.

Silk sticks to
Couples that watch
Him leave as
Lips fade.

So…

Please remember to
Dispose of Coca-Cola
Since they finished
Tainting hearts.

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