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Feeling Forgotten (Song)

Sealed her with a kiss,
Granted her one last wish,
But tommorow, seems so far away.
Seems too far away.

Tucked her in to sleep,
Prayed her soul to keep,
But she just seems so far away.
Seems so far away.

The tears to touch her face,
Just fade into my pillow,
Cuddling, I lean in to seal her again,
And she vanishes, a feeling forgotten.

I leaned in to seal her with a kiss,
And she vanished, like a feeling forgotten.

The day breaks, and I can't run,
From the vibrance of her beating sun,
Haunting, casting a shadow down,
Scorching everything around.

Her absense, she was never here,
But damnit she always felt so near,
My baby, she just seemed to go away,
But she was always too far away.

So the tears to touch her face,
Just fade into the assfault,
Seething, I try to lean in when,
She vanishes, her feelings forgotten.

I leaned in to seal her with a kiss,
And she vanished, so I'm feeling forgotten.

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Written recently about the idea of leaving someone, who was never there.

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  • eat.yo.soup
    November 11
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    T^T awwh


  • shattered.frisco
    October 19

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    That is a really interesting concept, leaving someone who was never there? I was confused by this for a bit, but then realized that I've done that before in my life, and even on more than on ocassion! Awesome song, hearing it with music would be wonderful!


    ej